Documentation Improvements: Grammar, Structure, and Readability Fixes #1057
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WalkthroughThe pull request includes multiple modifications across several documentation files related to the OP Chain ecosystem. Changes primarily focus on enhancing clarity, correcting minor errors, and improving the overall structure of the documents. Specific updates involve hyperlink formatting, grammatical corrections, and detailed explanations of operational components, such as the Changes
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🧹 Outside diff range and nitpick comments (7)
pages/builders/chain-operators/tutorials/adding-precompiles.mdx (3)
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8-13: Improve the warning callout style.Consider these refinements to align with the documentation guidelines:
- Replace "not" with "not" as italics shouldn't be used for emphasis
- Rephrase to avoid second-person pronouns:
- "You will not be able to receive" → "Significant developer support is not available"
- "be prepared to get your hands dirty" → "Implementation requires independent problem-solving"
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15-17: Revise the introduction for technical documentation style.
- Replace second-person pronouns:
- "you'll make" → "this tutorial demonstrates how to make"
- Capitalize technical terms:
- "EVM" is correctly capitalized
- Consider capitalizing "precompile" when referring to the specific component
91-91: Improve technical explanation style.Replace the personal pronoun "we" with more formal language:
- "we return" → "the function returns"
pages/builders/node-operators/management/metrics.mdx (1)
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1-71: Additional documentation improvements needed.While reviewing the entire document, I noticed several areas that could be improved according to the documentation guidelines:
- Title case usage in table headers needs adjustment
- Some sentences use personal pronouns that should be replaced with proper nouns
Here are the suggested improvements:
- | METRIC | DESCRIPTION | LABELS | TYPE | + | Metric | Description | Labels | Type | - To monitor the health of your node, you should monitor the following metrics: + To monitor the health of the node, monitor the following metrics: - Without peers, the `op-node` cannot sync unsafe blocks and your node will lag behind the sequencer + Without peers, the `op-node` cannot sync unsafe blocks and the node will lag behind the sequencerpages/builders/node-operators/tutorials/mainnet.mdx (2)
276-277: Improve sentence clarity and concisenessConsider revising the text for better readability:
-Snapshots are available for multiple dates and snapshots get larger as they get closer to the current date. +Snapshots are available for multiple dates, with more recent snapshots being larger in size.
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296-301: Enhance verification instructions clarityConsider these improvements:
-You should see the following output: +Expected output for this specific snapshot: ```bash ec4baf47e309a14ffbd586dc85376833de640c0f2a8d7355cb8a9e64c38bfcd1 mainnet-bedrock.tar.zst</blockquote></details> <details> <summary>pages/builders/chain-operators/tools/op-conductor.mdx (1)</summary><blockquote> `156-156`: **Improve formality in configuration note** Replace the informal contraction with more formal language and add clarity about the incompatibility. ```diff - OP_NODE_RPC_ADMIN_STATE: "" # this flag can't be used with conductor + OP_NODE_RPC_ADMIN_STATE: "" # this flag cannot be used with conductor due to state management conflicts
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pages/builders/chain-operators/tools/op-conductor.mdx (1)
Pattern **/*.mdx: "ALWAYS review Markdown content THOROUGHLY with the following criteria:
- Use proper nouns in place of personal pronouns like 'We' and 'Our' to maintain consistency in communal documentation.
- Avoid gender-specific language and use the imperative form.
- Monitor capitalization for emphasis. Avoid using all caps, italics, or bold for emphasis.
- Ensure proper nouns are capitalized in sentences.
- Apply the Oxford comma.
- Use proper title case for buttons, tab names, page names, and links. Sentence case should be used for body content and short phrases, even in links.
- Use correct spelling and grammar at all times (IMPORTANT).
- For H1, H2, and H3 headers:
- Use sentence case, capitalizing only the first word.
- Preserve the capitalization of proper nouns, technical terms, and acronyms as defined in the 'nouns.txt' file located in the root directory of the project.
- Do not automatically lowercase words that appear in the 'nouns.txt' file, regardless of their position in the header.
- Flag any headers that seem to inconsistently apply these rules for manual review.
- When reviewing capitalization, always refer to the 'nouns.txt' file for the correct capitalization of proper nouns and technical terms specific to the project.
"
pages/builders/chain-operators/tutorials/adding-precompiles.mdx (1)
Pattern **/*.mdx: "ALWAYS review Markdown content THOROUGHLY with the following criteria:
- Use proper nouns in place of personal pronouns like 'We' and 'Our' to maintain consistency in communal documentation.
- Avoid gender-specific language and use the imperative form.
- Monitor capitalization for emphasis. Avoid using all caps, italics, or bold for emphasis.
- Ensure proper nouns are capitalized in sentences.
- Apply the Oxford comma.
- Use proper title case for buttons, tab names, page names, and links. Sentence case should be used for body content and short phrases, even in links.
- Use correct spelling and grammar at all times (IMPORTANT).
- For H1, H2, and H3 headers:
- Use sentence case, capitalizing only the first word.
- Preserve the capitalization of proper nouns, technical terms, and acronyms as defined in the 'nouns.txt' file located in the root directory of the project.
- Do not automatically lowercase words that appear in the 'nouns.txt' file, regardless of their position in the header.
- Flag any headers that seem to inconsistently apply these rules for manual review.
- When reviewing capitalization, always refer to the 'nouns.txt' file for the correct capitalization of proper nouns and technical terms specific to the project.
"
pages/builders/node-operators/management/metrics.mdx (1)
Pattern **/*.mdx: "ALWAYS review Markdown content THOROUGHLY with the following criteria:
- Use proper nouns in place of personal pronouns like 'We' and 'Our' to maintain consistency in communal documentation.
- Avoid gender-specific language and use the imperative form.
- Monitor capitalization for emphasis. Avoid using all caps, italics, or bold for emphasis.
- Ensure proper nouns are capitalized in sentences.
- Apply the Oxford comma.
- Use proper title case for buttons, tab names, page names, and links. Sentence case should be used for body content and short phrases, even in links.
- Use correct spelling and grammar at all times (IMPORTANT).
- For H1, H2, and H3 headers:
- Use sentence case, capitalizing only the first word.
- Preserve the capitalization of proper nouns, technical terms, and acronyms as defined in the 'nouns.txt' file located in the root directory of the project.
- Do not automatically lowercase words that appear in the 'nouns.txt' file, regardless of their position in the header.
- Flag any headers that seem to inconsistently apply these rules for manual review.
- When reviewing capitalization, always refer to the 'nouns.txt' file for the correct capitalization of proper nouns and technical terms specific to the project.
"
pages/builders/node-operators/tutorials/mainnet.mdx (1)
Pattern **/*.mdx: "ALWAYS review Markdown content THOROUGHLY with the following criteria:
- Use proper nouns in place of personal pronouns like 'We' and 'Our' to maintain consistency in communal documentation.
- Avoid gender-specific language and use the imperative form.
- Monitor capitalization for emphasis. Avoid using all caps, italics, or bold for emphasis.
- Ensure proper nouns are capitalized in sentences.
- Apply the Oxford comma.
- Use proper title case for buttons, tab names, page names, and links. Sentence case should be used for body content and short phrases, even in links.
- Use correct spelling and grammar at all times (IMPORTANT).
- For H1, H2, and H3 headers:
- Use sentence case, capitalizing only the first word.
- Preserve the capitalization of proper nouns, technical terms, and acronyms as defined in the 'nouns.txt' file located in the root directory of the project.
- Do not automatically lowercase words that appear in the 'nouns.txt' file, regardless of their position in the header.
- Flag any headers that seem to inconsistently apply these rules for manual review.
- When reviewing capitalization, always refer to the 'nouns.txt' file for the correct capitalization of proper nouns and technical terms specific to the project.
"
pages/builders/tools/monitor/regenesis-history.mdx (1)
Pattern **/*.mdx: "ALWAYS review Markdown content THOROUGHLY with the following criteria:
- Use proper nouns in place of personal pronouns like 'We' and 'Our' to maintain consistency in communal documentation.
- Avoid gender-specific language and use the imperative form.
- Monitor capitalization for emphasis. Avoid using all caps, italics, or bold for emphasis.
- Ensure proper nouns are capitalized in sentences.
- Apply the Oxford comma.
- Use proper title case for buttons, tab names, page names, and links. Sentence case should be used for body content and short phrases, even in links.
- Use correct spelling and grammar at all times (IMPORTANT).
- For H1, H2, and H3 headers:
- Use sentence case, capitalizing only the first word.
- Preserve the capitalization of proper nouns, technical terms, and acronyms as defined in the 'nouns.txt' file located in the root directory of the project.
- Do not automatically lowercase words that appear in the 'nouns.txt' file, regardless of their position in the header.
- Flag any headers that seem to inconsistently apply these rules for manual review.
- When reviewing capitalization, always refer to the 'nouns.txt' file for the correct capitalization of proper nouns and technical terms specific to the project.
"
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pages/builders/tools/monitor/regenesis-history.mdx
[uncategorized] ~66-~66: Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
Context: ...ed some of our community and their users and we're sorry for the frustrations. In an...
(COMMA_COMPOUND_SENTENCE)
[style] ~66-~66: “Sorry” is a very overused expression. Consider replacing it with a more formal alternative.
Context: ...me of our community and their users and we're sorry for the frustrations. In an effort to preve...
(APOLOGIZE)
[style] ~66-~66: Consider a shorter alternative to avoid wordiness.
Context: ...s and we're sorry for the frustrations. In an effort to prevent similar situations from happeni...
(IN_ORDER_TO_PREMIUM)
🔇 Additional comments (2)
pages/builders/node-operators/management/metrics.mdx (1)
36-36: Description improvements look good.
The removal of redundant "cache" word from the metric descriptions improves clarity and eliminates repetition.
Also applies to: 39-39
pages/builders/chain-operators/tools/op-conductor.mdx (1)
195-195: LGTM: Header follows sentence case guidelines
The header "Transfer leadership" correctly follows the sentence case guidelines for documentation headers.
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Description
Made comprehensive improvements to the documentation. The following corrections and enhancements were made to ensure clarity, accuracy, and readability:
Changes Made
• Fixed typos and grammatical errors to improve overall text quality.
• Inserted missing prepositions to enhance sentence flow.
• Removed duplicate words that appeared consecutively, reducing redundancy.
• Corrected spacing issues, splitting words where they were incorrectly merged.
• Eliminated unnecessary punctuation (e.g., periods where they were not needed).
• Enhanced readability by refining sentence structure and ensuring consistent style.
Tests
Since this PR only affects documentation, no code testing was required. All changes were thoroughly reviewed for accuracy and adherence to style guidelines.
Additional context
These changes were made to provide clear, professional, and user-friendly documentation, minimizing potential misunderstandings.
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